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[[시카고]] serena's diary - essay

• 이름 : todms524
• 작성일 : 2014-07-09
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저번주 토픽이 safe였잖아요.. 요즘 하도 writing을 안한 거 같아서.. 연수일기 핑계로 writing을 써봤어요... 이건 숙제가 아니라 피드백을 못받아서 ㅠㅠ 여러분

들이 읽으시고 피드백좀 해주세용ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ틀린부분 많을거에요ㅠㅠ 제가 젤 아쉬운게 writing 실력을 많이 못 늘린거 같은........ㅠㅠㅠ


I think 'safe' meaning is how much we are satisfied with safety in our society.I know that safe has comprehensive meaning. We can't define it definetely.This

meaning is related to society circumstance, culture and diplomatic relations.For me, safe meaning is how much we can relax about crime.However, in my

country not only that meaning but almost all people might care about north korea's threat. It's big deal in my country.Eventually, in my city we have two

meaning of safe.


First, it's about crime.

Actually, nowdays in korea the percentage of crime is increasing.

I read a lot of articles about crime especially, human trafficking and children sexual abuse. Almost all victims are girl or woman. I heard that human

trafficking is serious problem. There are a lot of ways to lure victims and they extract their organs finally they are chopped. That's why police can't find

missing people. It's too cruel crime
.
And also child sexual abuse is hot potatoes in korea. The most shocking article is that a man who is teacher in elementary school slept with his students

several times. But he insists that they love each other. What a crazy situation. If I were a mom who has a daughter, I can't let her go to school. I can't believe

anyone.

One of the reasons why this crime is increasing is weak punishment. The government should fix the law about these crimes.

Second, it's about the North Korea's threat.

As you know, our country was divided two. Since then, they have been blackmailing us continuously. because we have different social systems. We have

democracy and they have communism. That’s why they are poor and a lot of people are suffering malnutrition. They always threat us to get money or foods

. Actually sometimes they attack us. It made a lot of soldier victims. So we have no option to block them. We don’t want to make victims. North Korea is kind

of outlaw in the world. Nobody handles to them. On our position, if we don’t want to fight and sacrifice our military, we just give a lot of things to them for free.

Actually as a south Korean, we have lots of unsafe things. However the two big things are crime and about north korea. We hope that we can live safe

country.

 
 
 
 
 
 

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